OOC: Serale Itre. Looks like I'll be helping out so on with your training!
Gemini watched the arrow fly down the range with her fists planted on her shapely hips. She gave a nod and smiled.
"Not bad, Itre. It at least stayed within your own target's path." She moved closer to him, took her own bow in hand and presumed her stance while she spoke.
"Your stance was good, though you flinched at the last moment before loosing your arrow. It's a common error of anticipation people make and it falls in the line of breathing, among other things we'll get to." Gemini's eyes went down the range. She then pulled her bowstring back nice and smoothly, her back straight but not too rigid.
"Now, before loosing your arrow take a slow deep breath and hold it like so, or some prefer to let out their breath and hold it that way."
Her chest rose as she did this, then stopped as she held her breath. After a few seconds she let go of her string, holding her posture. Still she didn't release her breath until she was sure the arrow was clear of her string. With the clear sound of her missle hitting the target with a resounding 'thwap', Gemini lowered her bow and turned to Itre.
"Now you try with five arrows. And don't worry about where your hitting. That will come later, but first things first. Stance and breathing techniques. If you aren't sure of how long to wait before lowering your weapon, try a count of ten. That should help." She added crossing her arms over her chest with her bow in one hand as she stepped to the side once again and watched Itre.